Tuesday, April 15, 2014

The Story Chapter 3: The temple in the Hills

A traveler from a far away land. A strange red-eyed creature that shares a bond with the traveler. A enemy who seeks revenge. What does it all mean? Hmm Well let the story continue.

After the encounter with the villainous Dark Blade, Jin collapses from exhaustion. For hours Jin is lying there until Master monk and his apprentice see a body laying in the dirt. They  decide to take Jin with them back to the temple. " Its a day journey from here Master, do you think he will survive?" asks the apprentice. The master says Well then we better move then. Give the man some water every few hour, that will do until we reach the temple.
Crossing the roaring river, climbing up the tallest trees and following the path of the stone steps. Deep in the middle of the forest is a temple that is nested high on a hilltop.

The master tells his apprentice to put the man in the resting quarters for now and make the medicine to ensure his recovery.


 After a few days on resting and bitter medication Jin awakes to the sound of a waterfall. "Good morning" says the monk How are you feeling young man. Jin holds his head and says I feel wobbly. The monk laughs heartily and tells him just the medicine taking effect. His apprentice gives the hungry traveler some food which he gladly accepts. Jin shows his thanks toward to monk and tell the Master his name and that he is from Zera.
     
The master was telling Jin that he and his apprentice was waiting for someone when they found him. Jin wonders who were they waiting for but he decides not to ask. The master monk then asked "what was he doing out there in the wastelands?"

Jin explain that he was investigating the egg that fell from the sky and that when got there he found the red-eyed creature. After he found Red-Eyes, He wander down the mountain but was followed by a knight known as Dark Blade. The Master tells Jin that he has heard stories about the knight and that he possesses the power to manipulate dragons. The power to manipulate dragons, now wonder he was really strong. Jin starts to think about Red-eyes and the possibility of him being a dragon.Suddenly Jin panics and asks the Master if has seen Red-Eyes? He replies no and Jin frantically searches the temple for it. He shouts at the sky and blames himself for losing Red-Eyes. The master put his hand on Jin's shoulder and tells him that don't fear, Faith will bring you to friend wherever he may be. Jin thanks for the master for his wisdom.


The wind picks up and a girl on top of giant bird appears. "Such power and that bird looks serious" says Jin. 

Jin shouts at the girl demanding to know who she is. The wind hits Jin hard as he blows far only for the Master to save him from falling to his death. My My says Master Monk, that is no way to treat a guest. The girl bows to master and that the bird attacked him to defend her. I am Caam says the girl and I've come to seek your assistance Master Monk.

1 comment:

  1. Ooooh, I really likes the story progression here. English related errors though Q_Q besides that, seems nice.

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