John after being rescued by Freed, walks back from the forest heading to village. He is thinking about everything that just happen. John being used to see warriors fight so he wasn't scared at all, just amazed on how skillful Freed was. He tells himself by having Freed train him he will be able to get stronger to realize his dream.
Back at the Village....
Freed brings the gang before the Court. There resides the Judge man.
who then sentences them to the dungeon for their crimes of thievery and blackmail. Don Zaloog pleads with the judges saying "We are all innocent, we are just trying to have a little something for ourselves" Judge man replies "if you want to survive you have to earn your place among us rightfully". The sound of the mallet hitting the wood, the five members of the Dark Scorpion were sentenced to 3 months within the dungeon. Don Zaloog shouts to John " I'll Get you for this, YOU WON'T ESCAPE MY WRATH!!"
John runs outside to get away from all the commotion. Freed shouts out to John with no answer. "Damn that kid" and begins to look for him all over. John hides in the stables. He is then greeted by a horse who trots over to him.He smiles and the horse neighs loud when John reaches out to it. The horse bolt out of the stables, Freed manages to grab him just in time before he gets run down by the horse.
Freed: You damn Kid ! what is the wrong with you? Thought you weren't scared of anything? John replies I'm not, you don't understand me at all. Just leave me alone. John breaks free from Freed's grip and begins to run off when suddenly the ground shakes violently.
Cracks in the grounds begins to open up. The townspeople are frantic and John is overwhelmed by the crowd when a crevice opens up and swallows him up. Freed see this and decides to go after him
Underneath the village...
John wakes up to underground temple. He sees Freed searching around when John weakly waves to him. Freed rushes to him and carries him on his shoulders. As they walk through the temples Freed sees the a shadows of something that isn't human. Drawing his sword, Freed Goes forward
Sean read the first sentence and felt slightly uncertain. So, he read it once more to himself. He went back to the previous chapter, and saw what he was looking for. He shouted, "John walked back to the village? Why didn't Freed give him a ride? What a douchebag!" Sean laughed to himself. He then continued to read chapter 9. He noticed a few grammatical errors; he shook his head, ashamed. Then he thought to himself that he was being too much of a grammar nazi and decided that he wouldn't post about it. Later on, he changed his mind because he has nothing better to do than criticize other's works. Despite that, he still thinks that this story is cool so far and is interested and intrigued enough to read the next chapter. He would also like to give the author props for doing a great job.
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